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الكاتب: | fadwa [ الأربعاء يناير 28, 2009 7:16 am ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | The world but not you |
i was encouraged by one of the members to put this poem i hope you like it The world but not you against me i can take the cruelty of the world, but i cant take what i see in your eyes i no longer understand you you`ve become a stranger to me i used to feel the pain before you felt it you used to be the part of me that i love, that i obey that part of me that i can never neglect or hate but suddenly all that changed i do not say that i hate you nor do i neglect what you meant to me all i want to say is, Leave me in peace. |
الكاتب: | Merciless Soulja [ الأربعاء يناير 28, 2009 3:39 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | Re: The world but not you |
الكاتب: | fadwa [ الأربعاء يناير 28, 2009 5:28 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | Re: The world but not you |
thanks alot Merciless Soulja i really do appreciate that you liked it thats my favourite line too that and ' leave me in peace' i think there is a type of poetry that you dont need to ryme in i dont know what its called thanks again |
الكاتب: | lost soul [ الأربعاء يناير 28, 2009 6:08 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | Re: The world but not you |
fadwa well done sweety nice and deep 4 reall i liked it it is simple and deep keep up girl |
الكاتب: | fadwa [ الأربعاء يناير 28, 2009 6:16 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | Re: The world but not you |
الكاتب: | AYMEN [ الخميس يناير 29, 2009 10:06 am ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | Re: The world but not you |
hey fadwa thats greate , i really like the simple meaning poems but to be frank it has the captivity of negativity |
الكاتب: | fadwa [ الخميس يناير 29, 2009 7:52 pm ] |
عنوان المشاركة: | Re: The world but not you |
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